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I'll Always Be True
Contributed by
aegurly
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Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 08:46:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Every second I'm not with you I'm a mess!
Now that your not here I feel I have less!
You were my everthing, I gave you my all!
Without you I just feel small!
As crazy as it seems,
Your always in my dreams!
Not knowing how to feel,
I wish it were real!
Yes,I still love you,
I'll always be true,
Can you tell me that too?
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Re: I'll Always Be True
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by BSteel on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 08:53:40 PM AEST
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very nice flow simple to the point,
and true. good work |
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Re: I'll Always Be True
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by Michael_Bevins on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 09:13:33 PM AEST
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| Very nice. I know how you feel. Im such a mess without my love. Love is all I have anymore. well great write. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: I'll Always Be True
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 09:37:59 PM AEST
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| You have the emotion down, but the words lack a bit. Maybe try to be more, flexible, with your words instead of the stiffness that you form your words in. I know what it feels like, to be a total mess without that one and only. It's a good write. ^_^ |
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Re: I'll Always Be True
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 09:43:49 PM AEST
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| good job. I know that feeling its crazy! nice poem i look forward to more ^^ |
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Re: I'll Always Be True
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 10:02:45 PM AEST
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Very simple, but sweet couplets...
Jenni |
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Re: I'll Always Be True
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by FRANCO on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 11:15:56 PM AEST
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A poetic statement of love, if that’s what you had in mind when you wrote it, friend you have achieved it .
FRANCO
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Re: I'll Always Be True
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 11:16:10 PM AEST
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| Hey, thanks for the comment. Good write. Sweet and simple. = ) |
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Re: I'll Always Be True
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 01:55:05 AM AEST
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| You sure you didn't go through my thoughts. This is how i always feel when i'm not with the one i love. Excellent poem |
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Re: I'll Always Be True
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by oreo910 on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 03:28:20 PM AEST
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AWESOME!!!!!!!! Can I say it again? AWESOME!! I loved will read again & again! Keep up the work! I can so relate! Pm me sum time! Oh & thanx 4 commentin my writes!
-l8ter, Arianna |
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Re: I'll Always Be True
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by bigduck6769 on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 07:42:09 AM AEST
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this is a nice easy read..
simple and to the point it seems..
good write
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Re: I'll Always Be True
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by redtears on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 08:33:37 PM AEST
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| absolutly lovely! i really enjoy reading your writing! if you haven't already, please read some of my other poems, thanks bunches for commenting! and please post more! |
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Re: I'll Always Be True
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 11:12:21 AM AEST
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| So good you put everything you feel into this and I loved it, xxxxxxx |
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