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HER DREAMS
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 05:24:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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on 15/04/2006 23:05
Her Dreams.
She worked all her life,to bring up her boys,
she scrimped and she scraped to buy them new toys,
they always ate well, and wore lovely clothes,
every morning at six, she always rose,
She worked so hard, she scrubbed and she cleaned,
her ambition in life to fulfill their dreams,
they went to college, they did so well,
both married a respectable girl.
Got their big houses and their new cars,
done well in their lives in business went far,
then she grew old, she felt so alone,
they never visited, never phoned home,
She sat by her self, so lonely and cried,
then one winter night, in her sleep died,
her sons came then, cleared all her things,
dumped it like rubbish, just kept her rings,
she gave her life to those two sons,
they never returned that love to their mum,
not every ones kids are so hard and callous,
all things in life should have a balance,
So remember what ever you do,
always spare time for some one called you....
Copyright ©
lillyjane
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Re: HER DREAMS
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 05:46:02 PM AEST
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aww, that's so sad...it really is terrible, you wrote it beautifully though.
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Re: HER DREAMS
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by aegurly on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 09:30:51 PM AEST
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hey great write it's so sad!!!
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Re: HER DREAMS
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by Manda2 on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 04:09:57 PM AEST
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| An excellent poem lillyjane, so well written. What are you doing when you think them up! Another brilliant write, so much is said in every verse. Keep writing. |
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Re: HER DREAMS
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by True on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 06:59:20 PM AEST
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| Very sad. I've heard of things like that happening before though. Where the parents worked so hard for their children and then the children ignore them once they don't need them. |
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