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Here I Sit
Contributed by
Whatsername
on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 03:56:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Here I sit
All glum and blue
Here I stay
Sad and true
Here I think
About your face
Here I dream
My head up in space
Here I live
Restrained and caged
Here I remain
Sorrowful and raged
And as I sit
I ponder on how
My life would fit
If your love was now
Copyright ©
Whatsername
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2006-04-15 15:56:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Here I Sit
(User Rating: 1 ) by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 05:48:21 PM AEST (User
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huh, interesting style, usually i really don't like the secret love or lost love poetry, but this one wasn't as...cheesy and childish. i loved it, great job.
~natalya
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Re: Here I Sit
(User Rating: 1 ) by aegurly on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 07:02:32 PM AEST (User
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i loved ur poem check some of mine out and comment!!!
here's one not my best but sorta relates yours is better!!!
lol!!
aegurly
http://your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=117483 |
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Re: Here I Sit
(User Rating: 1 ) by aegurly on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 10:14:13 PM AEST (User
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check my new poem out!!!
http://your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=118399 |
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Re: Here I Sit
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:05:47 PM AEST (User
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What can I say..Your poem are great!
So i will read all you have posted...
God Bless! |
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Re: Here I Sit
(User Rating: 1 ) by ham323 on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 11:43:03 AM AEST (User
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I really love your work. It's beutiful. |
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