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Answer Please
Contributed by
luckedout
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Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 03:39:29 PM in AEST
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I told you how I feel
and I have gotten no reply
We seem to talk everyday
And your always in my thoughts
You hug me close in your embrace
My heart begins to race
Could you stay?
Stop time today?
I dont want to see you leave
Though if you must go
Just tell me once
Exactly how you feel.
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2006-04-15 15:39:29]
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Re: Answer Please
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by n2dep2care on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 04:10:10 PM AEST
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I like this- simple, sweet and to the point.
Very nice write- keep it up.
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Re: Answer Please
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 01:59:20 AM AEST
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Going through the same thing
know what you are going through
good luck and hope it works out for the best |
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