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What is pain?
Contributed by
AdamChantell
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Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 10:41:23 AM in AEST
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What is pain?
Pain is when you need more than a tissue,
when you start to cry.
It's when there is an absence of peace
in your heart, filled by turmoil.
It's when you fall down and you cant get up,
and there is no one around to help you.
Pain is when faith is just another word.
"Pain is my true friend,
it's always been there for me,
even though i didnt want it,
it still wanted me."
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AdamChantell
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2006-04-15 10:41:23]
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Re: What is pain?
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by onceandagain on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 11:10:34 AM AEST
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| I can totally relate to your poem. I live with the same friend. It seems when I think I've finally found happiness, here comes the pain again, to remind me that it's never really far away. Stay strong, pray, and keep your head up. |
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Re: What is pain?
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 11:17:36 AM AEST
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| I too can relate, but like they say, tomorrow is another day. Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Re: What is pain?
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 02:53:12 PM AEST
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oh wow that's only too true, "Pain is when faith is just another word", tell me about it, lol. you described it well, so good write.
~natalya
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Re: What is pain?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 03:11:53 PM AEST
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Pain is my true friend,
it's always been there for me
You're very right, pain is so close every momment, you can't say you are 100% fine, in every second things can change, and pain can come. |
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Re: What is pain?
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by aegurly on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 05:18:33 PM AEST
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i loved the last line "Pain is my true friend,
It'a always been there for me,
Even though I didn't want it
It still wanted me."
I loved it all together great write!!!
Aegurly!! |
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Re: What is pain?
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by Archie on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 01:02:13 PM AEST
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This reminds me of the poem i wrote for my Mom when she died;
"She left me sad in the cold of spring
while the snow was still on the ground
I do not know How i can live without her
for her love is not around"
Quote from "Hello heartache"
You did a good job on this, I am impressed. |
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