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Grazed Affliction
Contributed by
Lips
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Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 08:58:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I'm over it
Your under it
Your all around it
I'm beside it
Getting nowhere
This is a nightmare
Too much despair
I do still care
And I gave you all
I surrended to your advances
I made deep wrenching pledges
That I would be there for you
Oh how i misconstrued
Your past it
I'm still in it
I'm reliving it
Your've but forgotten it
Eyes they swell with watered pain
I thought we wanted the same
Now I sit here shamed
Wish I had abstained
There was nothing I damn well gained
I'm drowning in it
Your flourishing in it
Your over it
I'm saddened by it
Angered by the past
How dare you leave me aghast
Did you enjoy shattering my glassed heart
I guess your happy now
I hope your proud
That you left me whimpering, wounded
In your black blizzard.
Copyright ©
Lips
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2006-04-15 08:58:13]
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Re: Grazed Affliction
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 03:02:13 PM AEST
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Your past it
I'm still in it
I'm reliving it
Your've but forgotten it
*sigh* don't you just hate it when that happens? yes, it hurts, bad, but...good luck getting over it, and i assume we all do sometime. great write, i loved it too.
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Re: Grazed Affliction
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by Keilantra on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 12:26:34 AM AEST
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| i realy like this. the first stanza really caught my attention and i think you did well by jumping right in to the subject, good poem, good flow, nice choice of words. keep it up! |
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