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termoil and pain
Contributed by
teddy
on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 05:59:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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living in a world of termoil and pain
most people wuld have thought i wuld go insane.
so curupt my life may be
u have a lesson to learn
life is not curupt, but me.
life torn to shreads in front of everyone
how many times has this been done
all or nothing sum wuld say
but no, it was only one.
a singular time this has happned.
once is enough
twice is too much
three i would be dead
for how can one live without your love,
when your love is all one has?
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teddy
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2006-04-15 05:59:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: termoil and pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by FRANCO on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 09:28:27 AM AEST (User
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An unique style of writing; but yet has an obvious clarity in the subject.. Interesting write Indeed.
FRANCO
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