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To you, My
Contributed by
desolated_denial
on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 02:51:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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A post - immaturity.
Time conflicts much like that of You and I.
Two subjects of abstract matter
Clashing against the currents of a coveted life
My Complete Opposite; The Beautiful, The Loved
I, The Obsolete and The Jaded
You have the "Better" deal, with your worldly possessions,
I have my mind
...
My mind.
You have your car,
I have my ...
My mind.
You have your fanciful consorts that prance at your side,
I have my ...
My Mind.
You have your loving embrace of a Family,
I have my ...
My Mind.
You have a hollow heart with Self-Righteous generosity,
I have my ...
My Mind.
"Two sides of a Jaded Mirror"
I title that is nothing if not fitting.
Take my hand and fall with me
Slipping forever in a past well worth forgetting
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2006-04-15 02:51:35]
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Re: To you, My
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 03:21:40 AM AEST
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oh wow...interesting...reminds me a lot of me and my..but anyway, great write, obviously well thought out, i loved it.
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Re: To you, My
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by Lips on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 04:18:01 AM AEST
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| Ha! I love it you have said how it is for many! |
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