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un-abused?
Contributed by
HatchetGirl
on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 12:36:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
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every word is screamed so loud
my ears are wounded
but you're so much closer
can you even hear the yelling?
with every punch this gets worse
I can feel your pain
but you're the one taking it
do you even feel it anymore?
every tear is more meaningless than the last
my whole face is soaked
but you're the only one with a reason to cry
have you no more tears?
every fight gets more deadly
I wish I could end this
but you still do nothing
why won't you stop this?
every time I ask myself why?
when will this end?
now ask yourself....
who does this hurt more...... me or you
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HatchetGirl
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2006-04-15 00:36:22]
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Re: un-abused?
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by TheStoryTeller on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 02:31:36 AM AEST
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This is very moving and very well written, i could feel your pain through out this...
Blessings to you.
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Re: un-abused?
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 02:46:26 AM AEST
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I can feel your pain.
If you ever need to talk pm me ok.
take care |
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