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Lost
Contributed by
Gigi_15
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Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 11:02:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm not lost in your eyes
I'm not lost in your lies
I'm not lost in the middle of nowhere
Because I know where I am
I know where just I want to be
I know just what I want to see
And I know just what you're doing to me
What I don't know is
This:
How one look into your eyes
Can make me believe all your lies
How the thought of your presence
Makes me wish
I was in the middle of nowhere
With no one other than you
Even if they'd blind folded me
I'd pick you without hesitation
But there's this truth
I don't want to face
Though denying it
Wouldn't make it less real
Ignoring it
Doesn't make me feel better
Nor does confronting it
This reality makes me lost
The reality where
I find myself falling in love with you
While all you do is tear me apart
Everytime, all over again
Copyright ©
Gigi_15
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2006-04-14 23:02:49]
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Re: Lost
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by JGB on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 11:20:15 PM AEST
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I wouldn't want to be "Lost" either.
Good write! Good job. |
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Re: Lost
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by Gigi_15 on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 11:57:42 PM AEST
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IM SOO SORRRYY again i did this and i dont know how to edit my poems it's supposed to be..I know just where I want to be.....oopsy..
-Gigi.. |
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Re: Lost
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by aegurly on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 10:34:42 AM AEST
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hey i like the title!!!
great write keep it up u got talent!!!!!
aegurly read mine and comment!!! |
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