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I'll Help You See
Contributed by
Jen54
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Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 10:35:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Come with me
I'll help you see
The darkness isn't everywhere
There's light out there
In you, in me
I'll help you see
Just come with me
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2006-04-14 22:35:14]
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Re: I'll Help You See
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by Tiffyo4 on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 09:58:15 AM AEST
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good write but i know your better then this write what you really mean don't sugarcoat it. but other then that you know i like your work.
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Re: I'll Help You See
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by Caged Soul on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 02:29:33 PM AEST
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Many people I know don't like this kind of poetry because of the "hopeful" facter. Me being the optemistc person that I am, absolutely love it, and this poem is very much loved. it's well balanced and simple, as to not obscure the truth behind it.
Good job
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Re: I'll Help You See
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by sadaddy on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 01:20:33 AM AEST
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Jen54, short and direct to the point. Some people do not like that but if it can be said with less words then say it. Great Job, there is always a beacon of light that can be found in each and everyone of us if we would just let it out. Be good and take care.
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