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YOU'RE SUICIDE!!!
Contributed by
oreo910
on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 04:52:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sitting on the floor thinking about your life,
You have one question the answer lies in the knife,
Slowly you cut your arm and you scream out blood,
The tears follow and it all begins to flood,
You feel the pain finally seizing,
Suffering, crying, failing it all starts easing,
You do this over and over again,
Hoping God will forgive you for your sin,
In the back of you mind you say a prayer,
The more and more you do the more your brain starts to tear,
You finally decide that this isn't worth the fight,
You know suicide isn't what God sees as right,
But you play the perfect music the world starts to blurr,
You grab the knife and take a drink of liquor,
The pain begins to fade together,
It seems like you're taking forever,
You write your note explaining your deed,
After you cry you succeed,
Your family finds you on the floor,
They realise you couldn't take anymore,
They cry and cry as families do,
They love and miss only you.
Copyright ©
oreo910
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2006-04-14 16:52:38]
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Re: YOU'RE SUICIDE!!!
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by Michael_Bevins on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 05:10:35 PM AEST
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| Oh my GOD! that was beautiful! I loved it. you know it takes a lot to grab my attention with words but thats was amazing GREAT FREAKIN JOB! |
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Re: YOU'RE SUICIDE!!!
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by aegurly on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 06:54:32 PM AEST
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loed it great write read mine and comment
aegurly!!!!! |
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Re: YOU'RE SUICIDE!!!
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by aegurly on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 06:55:30 PM AEST
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loved it great write read mine and comment
aegurly!!!!! |
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Re: YOU'RE SUICIDE!!!
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 12:32:47 AM AEST
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| wow you did good on this write. |
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Re: YOU'RE SUICIDE!!!
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by Tiffyo4 on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 03:43:34 PM AEST
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i really like this write it speaks to me i tryed to kill myself not to long ago but im still here keep up the good work
Tiff |
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