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Holdin On
Contributed by
Lips
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Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 04:42:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Beaten
Belated
Its coming to my door
I dont want to be taken
Wisped wind
I feel you near
The lights din
Charcoled days
Whiten nights
Its time to hold ur withered hand
Am I allowed to be sad?
Hope this ride is as bumpy as my last ride Mr Reaper
A sudden glance
The face was disarrayed
"I have made a mistake"
And with a flash my hand was release
No don't go
I'm resolving,
Resolved
I wanna go, don't leave me here
Mr Reaper I felt death and I want it
Copyright ©
Lips
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2006-04-14 04:42:33]
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Re: Holdin On
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by Michael_Bevins on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 08:28:23 AM AEST
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| Nice, nicely painted a picture in my mind. Great job :) |
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Re: Holdin On
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by aegurly on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 02:16:44 PM AEST
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HEY GREAT WRITE HEY CHECK MINE OUT AND COMMENT PLEEZ!!!!!!
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