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Pain
Contributed by
Madwriter15
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Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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pain is hate. things you don't expect. pain is school were you're surrounded by fools. pain aint really all that great. the hurt is a pain to far to great. When you are by fool you don't feel full. full to the heart my you never feel this way the pain I go through. If you do kill yourself, kill til the pain never feels the same. as they say pain is love and love is pain like they say. but there's no love here no more just sorrow no feel, no deal. So pain is good but don't feel the need to bleed or the hurt that's inserts my love and pain but never to gain. damn let it be done. burned for a lifetime.
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Re: Pain
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 09:25:25 AM AEST
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| i know the pain. but dont let it get to you. keep a smile on your face, and everything can, will get better. i promise you... all you need to do is wait, and all you need is hope, trust and pixie dust! thanks for sharing this one and take care! |
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Re: Pain
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 02:31:10 AM AEST
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I've felt that pain as well. I liked this a lot. This was great and filled with so much pain and truth
When you are by fool you don't feel full
So true keep on writing.
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Re: Pain
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by lilch4ever on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 12:17:58 AM AEST
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| That was good. Could feel your pain. Hope things get better for you. Nice write. |
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