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paper napkins and post-it notes
Contributed by
twick
on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 12:09:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Love me or hate me
just tell me why
but all I get is compromise
Show the passion
I want a real reaction.
I'd rather be divisive
without consensus
Soon I'll just start doing it to ***** people off
to make sure someone
gives some kind of response.
Don't worry
I'll stay true to my heart
but I'll start throwing daggers for fun.
I can be disturbing
because I am disturbed
I'll keep shouting, yelling
I will be heard
See, I want this so bad
probably more than I've wanted
anything before
It scares the **** out of me
because it's a stupid silly dream
That's the weirdest part
I've never really been a dreamer
I just feel this urge from deep inside
competing for time
waiting for mine
It's illogical and I'm cynically
intelligent
So I don't quite understnad
I realize they're not the best
I don't even have a ***damn style
but all the while
I know
I will do something with this
even if its a miss
I only ask of you
some time and effort, even advice
tell me if it strikes a chord in the mind
And I'll make this promise, the only one I'll ever give,
I'll die like this(hopeless)
Copyright ©
twick
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2006-04-14 00:09:07]
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Re: paper napkins and post-it notes
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by bakacaka on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 06:59:19 PM AEST
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I think this is a very great portrayal of untapped talent. I feel this way a lot about my art.
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Re: paper napkins and post-it notes
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by AnastasiaN on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 02:39:46 AM AEST
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| i enjoyed this write...i can relate well...i'm a somewhat disturbed and cynical person as well...lol but i think the best creativity comes from the most unpleasant places...what else are ya gonna do with all the cynicism? haha good write i'll be reading more. |
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