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Waterfall
Contributed by
outsider
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Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 04:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I write these words while you are asleep
Just with the thought of you in my mind
Brings a smile to my face.
I think to myself how my love runs so deep
How your ways are so loving and kind
And how just the sight of you makes my heart race.
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Waterfall...
My feelings flow like subtle tunes
Melodically to you.
You
Like the sweetest song ever sung
They float carried on the warm breeze
Stronger than bands of steel
And surer than the finest crafted arrow
Yet softer than the rarest purest silk
And more profound than all philosophy.
If I could carve all my feelings
Into a finely sculpted sailing boat
Id let them be carried on the river
Of my emotions
And let them all flow over the waterfall
And into your ocean
So they could finally be home.
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outsider
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2003-02-02 16:20:00]
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Re: Waterfall
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 07:43:23 PM AEST
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| well written, you carry a wonderful tune in your heart, |
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Re: Waterfall
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by Lovingangel4u on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 04:56:30 AM AEST
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| Beautiful flowing words darling. Another wonderful expression of your love. ILUVM |
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Re: Waterfall
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 12:37:24 PM AEST
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| beautiful.......................... love it |
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Re: Waterfall
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by mckayla on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 12:53:56 PM AEST
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Very beautiful! I loved reading it!
mckayla |
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Re: Waterfall
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by riverofwords on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 06:10:14 AM AEST
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beautiful write
great imagery
loved it
peace be your journey
Terry |
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