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You
Contributed by
Michael_Bevins
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Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 05:33:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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O baby please dont let me be
Baby please dont set me free
I know you'll always care
Baby i know you'll akways be there
Even when I just cant help but frown
You always seem to turn it upsidedown
You make my world go round and round
You are the happieness that I have found
You are the treasure that i long to keep
You are the treasure thats all for me
You know my faults and keep them away
Baby you know when ive gone astray
You are the foundation from which a stand
You are with me hand in hand
You love me all the same
Even when ive put you to shame
You know what feels just right
You know how to bring out that inner light
You are the one that is for me
You are the treasure and I am the key
Baby you are mine and I am yours
Copyright ©
Michael_Bevins
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2006-04-13 17:33:35]
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Re: You
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by Tiffyo4 on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 05:57:43 PM AEST
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i like it alot we have similar taste in poetry keep writing
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Re: You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 06:34:36 PM AEST
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Very sweet write, love is wonderful
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Re: You
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by inoc on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 09:03:41 PM AEST
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...loved... you are the treasure and I am then key.... great poem...have a good easter
coni |
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Re: You
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by Michael_Bevins on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 09:10:30 PM AEST
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| Thaks guys I love getting feedback. I am a very new poet and this rly is just the opposite of where i thought id be. But i enjoy it. Thanks again. |
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Re: You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 10:17:00 PM AEST
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A nice style u have mike, eliquent and flowing. welcome 2 ypdc.
Ben |
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Re: You
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by Lips on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 04:10:27 PM AEST
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| Good write. Not easy to write about love .. not for me anyway ... I enjoyed this! |
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Re: You
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by oreo910 on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 05:27:27 PM AEST
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| Awesome I know how u feel but now I dont hav no 1 2 feel that 4. |
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