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When the Morning Comes.
Contributed by
Alison
on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 08:39:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When the morning comes,
And the light flows gently across the floor,
Streaming in through the window by the door,
Peeking in through the shadows of night,
Colors so bright and sure floating as a kite,
Await my eyes to see,
Sweet light of this day of mystery,
Illuminating the sides of the wall,
Carrying all the way to the hall,
The yellow-full smiles of the sun,
Beckon for me to arise for this one,
Live this strange new day,
Coming work and play,
Meeting enemies and friends,
At times having loses or having wins,
The light with me will stay,
Until the time it peacefully goes away,
Giving up the throne of the sky,
Winking and laughing without the question why,
The moon be it as ruler of the night,
Yet the sun stays bright,
As it promises another tomorrow,
Filled with pain, joy, and sorrow,
So I shall wait for all I may partake,
Each moment the best I shall make,
In the fullness of such promises,
And when the morning comes.
Copyright ©
Alison
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2006-04-13 08:39:05]
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Re: When the Morning Comes.
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 09:18:10 AM AEST
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Some lovely imagery here.. I liked this..
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Re: When the Morning Comes.
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by Archie on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 03:09:50 PM AEST
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| This is good. I like your play on the light shining in through the doors and windows, great imagery. |
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Re: When the Morning Comes.
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by whiteleo1984 on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 03:48:30 PM AEST
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| very well done... awesome imagery, gives the reader a great picture of what you're talking about. |
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Re: When the Morning Comes.
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by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 04:20:48 AM AEST
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this poem has style, this poem has grace,
it put a smile upon my face. Great write
went perfect with the coldplay i was listenin 2,
hence the ryhme at the top.
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