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Etched Echoes
Contributed by
Lips
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Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 02:03:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I watch you and I see you cry;
I take a step back and watch you do the same.
Reaching out, my hand meets yours;
I pull away and you withdraw your palms.
You look so blue and hollow as you tilt your head;
I hold my arms out to you.
As I reach to wipe the tears,
I am overwhelmed as you wipe mine.
And as I look closer, I am surprised;
I cant believe my eyes!
How can it be..
Its me!
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Lips
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2006-04-13 02:03:25]
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Re: Etched Echoes
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by Shmokin on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 04:25:35 AM AEST
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| Nice write :-) |
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Re: Etched Echoes
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 05:06:28 AM AEST
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| very good |
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Re: Etched Echoes
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by Michael_Bevins on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 05:45:25 AM AEST
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| Nice! |
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