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Why
Contributed by
dh_guitarist
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Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 10:04:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I want everything to be alright
But its not and you still go home
I have to be here alone all night
And now you don't even have a phone
Things have changed
And not for the good
Its all been re-arranged
And now its misunderstood
I love you
And I want you to love me
You say that you do
But you just don't see
Why do we always fight
Why can't I get things right
Why do you always cry
Can you please tell me why
I want you to be happy
And I want the same for me
You say that you want me to love you
I say I need you to love me
If we were by some miracle
Able to go and get married
We would always be fighting
I sorry baby, its hereditary
My family is different you say
I really don't care
It sounds like you are making excuses
To get the hell out of here
Why do you want to go
Why do I need you so
Why do I want to be left alone
Why do you never go
We never get things right
All we do is fight
Why can't we make things right
Can you tell me why
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Re: Why
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 10:21:45 PM AEST
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emotional read, I understand this as I lived it for many years. Hope things work out well.
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Re: Why
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 10:24:31 PM AEST
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Lots of potent questions here.. I hope you two get things resolved soon. Keep writing your thoughts..
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Re: Why
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 11:07:54 PM AEST
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A very esential peice of writting very effective in it's emotioanl expression. as 4 the question, i'll leave that alone. nice peice of poetry.
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Re: Why
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 05:25:16 AM AEST
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| Well done , well expressed |
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Re: Why
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by Michael_Bevins on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 07:14:22 PM AEST
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| Very emotional, I loved it. O BTW sry lol i Have a poem i put on here today I titled Why?... didnt know u had urs titled that. That might be why i got so many reads... ppl thought i copied yours lol. but mine is very much my own work i assure you. well... Great job keep it up! |
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Re: Why
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 03:12:37 AM AEST
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aw, well, good luck getting things to work out, it was a really great write too, very honest.
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Re: Why
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by richcol7522 on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 01:38:05 AM AEST
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What I said in my last comment I can say for this as well. It is very emotional and I know exactly what you are going through. I have been married for five years and fighting seems to be what me and my wife do best. Well for your sake I hope that you two are able to work things out one way or another.
Take care-
Rich |
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