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April Moon
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 09:16:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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How fine it seems, this mild April night,
to lean from the window..
hearing clearly, ringing from the shadowy bright,
the moon's unearthly cry!
Southwest, the wind blows..
rippling 'round the point in mellow tune;
but mournful, like that of one who raves,
is the laughter of the April moon!
B
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Re: April Moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by jada on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 09:19:47 PM AEST (User
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interstin. i like ur prosective.good write
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Re: April Moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 09:23:41 PM AEST (User
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peaceful write, I really loved this .
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Re: April Moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 09:52:41 PM AEST (User
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Oh Billy, how I do love the moon! This was a splendid short
write. It's amazing in only eight little lines how you can
finesse the moon into such delightful personification.
A thing of beauty it is.
Wonderful write.
~Breezy |
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Re: April Moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 10:17:04 PM AEST (User
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A wonderful poem to read before bed... I have to go look at the moon before I sleep.....tho' after reading this I don't think I need to.
Lovely write..
Jenni |
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Re: April Moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 10:52:55 PM AEST (User
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Tranquil , lovely, and amazing !!What a beautiful write,having just come off my front porch from admiring the moon, I can share your love for its magnificence!!!!
Hugs LG |
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Re: April Moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 08:41:21 AM AEST (User
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You are a true poet my friend. great write......Mike |
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Re: April Moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 07:05:21 PM AEST (User
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Simple but poetic, very atmospheric! Nice touch, Billy.
Andrew |
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Re: April Moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 07:25:25 PM AEST (User
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a resfreshing outlook on the beauty and power of the moon.
wzd |
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Re: April Moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 08:09:28 PM AEST (User
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~*Billy*~
In eight lines you have managed to write
about the beauty that dons the sky at night
with such ease.
A powerful, lovely and beautiful write penned
by an extraordinary and talented poet.
Always a pleasure dearest ~*Billy*~
*love n hugs from ur fan/friend*
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: April Moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 07:56:06 PM AEST (User
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Nice mood write.
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