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Fate
Contributed by
Suzuka
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Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 07:22:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Fate.......
Such a strong word.....
but, those four letters speak the truth of everything.
Everything that has happened, or that is going to happen.
It's all because of that simple word.
Their world, shaded in the darkness, away from fear
their hearts torn in all directions.
One lost in the vast grayness of the forgotten world....
one simply at home......
and one wandering, in search of himself....
but all are alone.
Or, at least it feels that way.
What is going to happen?
Or the better question,
what has happened.................
Copyright ©
Suzuka
... [
2006-04-12 19:22:02]
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Re: Fate
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by TiaXander on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 07:33:53 PM AEST
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| LOVE IT! |
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Re: Fate
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 07:42:04 PM AEST
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very true sileem very true..you are a very talented writer..check out my poems sometime if you feel like it..even thoughh they cant even attempt to be as good as yours!!
~Chrissy..*~ |
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Re: Fate
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by jada on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 08:53:59 PM AEST
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| DEEP VERY DEEP THAT WAS A GOOD POEM THAT FELT GOOD TO READ.GOOD WRITE |
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Re: Fate
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by candysears on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 10:31:22 PM AEST
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| Good write...God Bless! |
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