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Together We Had It All
Contributed by
aegurly
on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 06:42:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Together We Had It All
Together we had it all,
Without you I just fall.
I cry every night and day
Praying to God it will just go away.
I tell myself just to let go,
Even though I still love you.
Is this feeling going to last,
Or are all the memories in the past.
Not having you is such a loss,
To have you back I wouldn't care the cost.
Everytime I see you smile,
Everything's worth while.
Everytime I hear your voice,
I have to make the choice.
To keep on tryin' to get you back'
Or just to forget you!!!
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aegurly
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2006-04-12 18:42:14]
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Re: Together We Had It All
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 07:01:01 PM AEST
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i like this...its how i feel about my ex actually..tough time i know..im also quite young..well ttyl
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Re: Together We Had It All
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by jada on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 09:40:45 PM AEST
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| yes this was an excellent poem. me too i felt that was about my ex and dont worry weve all been through it.good write |
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Re: Together We Had It All
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by Michael_Bevins on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 09:17:02 PM AEST
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| Very nice. Enjoyed it! |
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Re: Together We Had It All
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by randumbchit on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 10:35:56 AM AEST
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| excellent only one suggestion no poetry ever has to rhyme ever |
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