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The Price of Love
Contributed by
Kunoichi
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Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 05:24:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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To love, you have to pay a price.
With that price comes a gamble.
The gamble is to put your heart on the table of betting.
Betting in the game of love can hinder or help you.
It'll hurt you, or lead to further things.
Those things are a blessing, they will make a person happy, but only if they want it.
And so, as we depart, I wish everyone luck paying the price of love.
I know from experience that it's a high price to pay!
Are you sure you want to?
Hope you like it! =P --<--@ Please accept the rose!
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Kunoichi
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2006-04-12 17:24:25]
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Re: The Price of Love
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by AdamChantell on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 10:05:14 AM AEST
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| I'm surprised 10 people have read this and no comments. i like your style, love does come at a price and sometimes a gamble. love sometimes "against all odds" too. anyways i like this and i hope you continue to keep on writing. |
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Re: The Price of Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:09:38 PM AEST
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Very True.
I liked how you transport all the feeling, to a clear example like the table of betting. The Gambling.
It's nice.
And yes, Betting in love can hinder or help.
Also, it is really a high price to pay, but if everything went ok, It was worth the paying. |
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Re: The Price of Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:12:10 PM AEST
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And also, if the prev. post said that it was surprising to see that many people read and not commented, then I have to say that:
It is even more surprising that many people read it, but no one rated. Right? Give you a 5 |
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