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The Dream

Contributed by malice_in_wonderland on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 02:51:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

THE DREAM

I stand in the bathroom
Glaring in the darkness
Of my eyes
Feeling the sharp pain
Rubbing against my skin
A single tear falls along with many more
Every one of them falls with a stinging pain
As it crashes on my bloody wrist
I punish myself from my stupidity
I make myself feel better by hurting my soul
Because I hurt you;
I press it harder; I can’t take it more any more
I drop the cold metal knife
it loudly hits the ground, but to me it is just a faint sound of slow motion
I see fading, dimmering lights, I see my wrist
My heart breaks, I’m falling in slow motion of
Every beat of my furious heart
I look up to see the pain and sadness in your eyes
I can’t hear you but I can read your heartbreaking
Words from your lips, your saying NO, why did you?I love you, don’t go I take one last look at your precious face so loving, so warm, I close my eyes and then I wake up in a quick cold sweat along with a shriek of fear and pain intensely going through my veins, I take a short breathe of pleasure knowing it was just a figure of my
imagination.

Copyright Â© malice_in_wonderland ... [ 2006-04-12 14:51:00]
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Re: The Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by TiaXander on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 07:39:53 PM AEST
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Hmm unlike you my dream was and still is a part of reality. How you captured everything so vividly an portrayed it...your title got me from the beginning.

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