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Walking Away
Contributed by
spyndl
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Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 02:14:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My heart is not what it used to be
Shattered by your lack of wanting to be with me
I don’t know how you could pass me up so easily
After what I went through to be with you
You said there was something missing from the start
Now I realize it was your heart
So I had to say good bye
Now all I can do is fight these familiar feelings of wanting to die
Everything I see reminds me of you
The places we went, things we saw
Come flooding back to nail me against the wall
The music I hear brings tears to my eyes
I cry now for what I’ve lost
For now my heart just simply rots
No more will I wake to your embrace
I’m shattered now
Distraught from all this pain
I don’t hate you for what you’ve done
You were my sun
But time’s moved on and that sun has set
Darkness now tries to creep back in
I fear my final fight is about to begin
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Re: Walking Away
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by Alison on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 04:07:59 PM AEST
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| when the darkness of night sets in just look up and you will see the stars! wonderful write, full of meaning and pain.... |
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Re: Walking Away
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by Michael_Bevins on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 04:36:40 PM AEST
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| Reminds me of myself. Great poem, keep it up. |
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Re: Walking Away
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by whiteleo1984 on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 12:04:33 AM AEST
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| full of pain and strong emotions... i understand how u feel but u need 2 remember that the stars r still visible thru those clouds |
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Re: Walking Away
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by Spike on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 02:31:22 AM AEST
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Ain't it always the way. Don't worry - it's the next one that kills ya. Top write, by the way, and very heartfelt.
Spike |
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