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Trying To Get By
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 11:26:06 AM in AEST
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Dad I am trying to get by,
While deep inside my soul does cry,
It asks God why he took you.
Painted my world in ten shades of blue.
My life feels empty and the shine has gone,
As down here with us is where you belong,
Your love will never fade away,
It is by my side day by day.
I look at your photo in my frame,
I feel guilty like I’m the one to blame,
I couldn’t save you even from death,
I couldn’t give back to you your last breath.
Life goes on when loved ones leave,
And we left behind struggle and grieve,
Trying to cope with the loss and pain,
Knowing that never will we see you smile again?
I just wish this was just a bad dream,
But this time everything is as it seems,
I can’t turn back the hands of time,
To again make you ours, to make you mine.
Your smile lit up the darkest room,
Chased away everyone’s sadness and gloom,
If you were still here my heart would again beat,
But right now the world has fell around my feet.
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pixie
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2006-04-12 11:26:06]
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Re: Trying To Get By
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by Syloss on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 12:24:35 PM AEST
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| This poem has a lot of meaning to me. My father died last year as well. |
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Re: Trying To Get By
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 01:11:06 PM AEST
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I feel your pain in this write, Hun.... I am sorry for your loss....
Good to see you again..
Love and Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Trying To Get By
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 04:19:50 PM AEST
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Oh sweetie... Reading this breaks my heart.
I wish I could take away all your pain...
This is such a heartfelt write, hun, so honest and emotional.
Take care.
Much love,
Phyllis xxx |
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Re: Trying To Get By
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by suesmuse1 on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 06:38:24 AM AEST
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I know exactly what you feel! Hold them in our hearts forever!
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Re: Trying To Get By
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 03:09:40 PM AEST
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Another masterpeice pix, but more, it's so
realistic i can feel your hurt and also visualize the love and goodness you put foward in every peice of writting you give us. this is truly above what is called poetry.
excuse me while i OD on your poetry.
**********
(((( Pixie ))))
Ben |
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