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FOR SALE
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 09:09:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Im feeling bad and neglected,
you feel like that when your rejected,
I no longer wear that small gold band.
so im free to hold your hand,
If my hands feel a bit rough,
its all the years of washing up,
If my face is a bit baggy,
its all the worry made it saggy,
If my eyes look a bit red,
its years of tossing in my bed,
dont sit there like a quivering coward,
if I was a jacket I'd be in Harrods,
Before I go i'll blow a kiss,
erm does my bum look big in this..
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lillyjane
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2006-04-12 09:09:06]
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Re: FOR SALE
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 10:27:13 AM AEST
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| I get your point. Good write |
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Re: FOR SALE
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by Syloss on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 12:28:15 PM AEST
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| I like this. I think it is worth you going back and embellishing it some though. |
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Re: FOR SALE
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by Manda2 on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 04:19:25 PM AEST
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| I like this poem very much. If you were a jacket you would definetely be in Harrods! Well done. |
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Re: FOR SALE
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by samwrue on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 11:46:14 AM AEST
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| very creative |
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