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I'm Not Coming Back…
Contributed by
born2loveyou123
on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 06:35:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Everything's right
And nothings wrong
When I look at your face
And I'm in your arms
Later that night
I look up at the stars
And wonder which one
That could be ours
Than something happened
And I didn't know what to do
You said you loved me
And there's nothing to lose
But for some odd reason
I didn't believe you
And when you looked in my eyes
It wasn't really you
You told me you weren't lying
And that it was true
Yet I know the stories
And it makes me blue
So now I gotta let you go
Now matter how much I don't want to
I know it's for the best
And that I have to
So now I say goodbye
And I look in your eyes
And I see what has fallen
It's the stars in the sky
Stars are falling
All around me
Faster and faster they fall
As I fade away into where I lay
I'm gone for good
And there's no turning back
No matter how much you beg
I'm not coming back
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Re: I'm Not Coming Back…
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by Kellros on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 09:04:55 AM AEST
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| If you can apply this to more than 1 person, don't you think the problem doesn't lay at the consequence but instead at the source? Source implying yourself, look deep within yourself to find who you really are! And seperate what you want to be from what not, it's all about knowing yourself in the end to better your own situations ( and relationships ). |
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Re: I'm Not Coming Back…
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by Syloss on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 12:32:32 PM AEST
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| Good write! There is nothing wrong with looking for and waiting for “the one” and rejecting all others. Keep up the good work and the hunt. |
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