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The Eyes of a Lover

Contributed by oreo910 on Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 07:43:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I walk by the two of you sitting together,
Noticing every detail of her face,
I see that you have the grasp of her hand,
And a whole in the heart makes a place,
I see how pretty and perfect she looks,
You seem happy and glad to be with her,
But looking at her makes me start to cry,
And I just wanna hit her,
I miss your voice so calming,
I miss the touch of your fingertips,
I wish the two of you would split,
I miss the taste of your sweet lips,
The girl notices my staring,
And points me out to you and you smile,
But I just turn away crying,
You're smile just drives me wild,
The girl walks over to me and says hello,
I just walk even faster and she follows,
She says her name and tells me she knows,
But she just makes me fills me with hollows,
She says she understands but you are hers,
And I must stay away and never stare,
But you just wink and walk over,
You say it's wierd for us to meet there,
You notice I'd been crying and give me the look,
I hate you so much it I just wanted to hit the two of you,
She looks at me and takes you away,
From then on we didn't exchange a word or even two,
But still I think of only you.

Copyright © oreo910 ... [ 2006-04-11 19:43:46]
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Re: The Eyes of a Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by Adelle on Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 11:45:46 PM AEST
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THAT SUCKS!! GET A PUNCHING BAG AND PUT THEIR FACE ON IT AND PUNCH AWAY!!! IF YOU NEED TO WRITE 50 POEMS TO HELP YOU HEAL WITH THE PAIN, THEN DO SO- SO WRITE AWAY-

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