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evil lurks..
Contributed by
hannah_heaven
on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 06:15:35 PM in AEST
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my soul cries out
its staring
in the middle of the night
the clock strikes 3
the time has come
its awoken me..
the evil starts
sinking in its teeth
the pain its causing
is drawing crimson regret
blood pouring curse
it returns to me
no salvation this time
only cold sweat and sins
it crosses my soul
with its evil pressence
its lurking deep
like some sort of wilterd cocoon
awaiting to blossom its evil wings
and spread along the sea of souls
cursing and regurating lifes of innocent
it awaits us all along some paths
and others at most unwilling moments
evil lurks..
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hannah_heaven
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2006-04-11 18:15:35]
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Re: evil lurks..
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 06:33:17 PM AEST
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whoa, you're right, dark...loved it though, great imagery.
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Re: evil lurks..
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by TiaXander on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 06:49:22 PM AEST
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| Great write an all but I think maybe you should have gotten a little bit more descriptive an gone into more depth about your own ordeal... |
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