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Contributed by abnormalpunk on Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 02:27:20 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

forever seemed to long for me
so i chose to make it start today
i went to church, (which is rare for me)
and sadly for you, i ran away.

i sat through the horrible singing
even though it was by a professional choir
it was great going to a concert for free
but god, they have made you a liar

when i tell people i hate christians
they wonder why if im 'one of them'
just keep reading my story
you'll understand by the end

you see, it wasnt that the music was bad
it was all on key and harmonic
but the thing thing that bothered me
everyone's actions were also melodic

they all swayed in a zombified way
and i tried but i couldn't feel god
i was trapped in the middle of a cult meeting
disguised as a church building squad

all that mattered were the numbers they brought
whether it be people or money
they higher the digits became
the more i found it funny

funny that 'this' is what church has become
funny that 'these' are the holy
funny that 'this' is what they made god
all because they changed him so slowly

the world doesnt hate us because we dont sin
by us i mean those who are saved
they hate us cause you act like you dont
and make them feel like we're enslaved

p.s. i wrote this poem to show how mutalated the church has made itself. i am an on fire christian. i just look outside of the box. in this case, the box is the church. i look at it from the outside and cry.

Copyright © abnormalpunk ... [ 2006-04-11 14:27:20]
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by Mild_Tempest on Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 04:09:31 PM AEST
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I've often spent long nights thinking about religion. And I've made a conclusion similar to yours. Religion is a tough subject to write about, to talk about, and express. Good write.

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