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The Sickness
Contributed by
aegurly
on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 10:43:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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What's happening to me
The sickness still lingers
As people laugh and point fingers
How long's it gonna last
Or are all the memories in the past
You kept me going
And now that your gone
Nothin's goin' my way
Tommorow's not just another day
Your pictures are still here as they smear with tears
Now that your not here to fight away my fears
Nothings going right
Everything's wrong
When's it gonna fix and stop playin' trick's
My heart can't take much more ache
How much more's it gonna take
To have you back is what I need to help cure me
Still wondering why?
Still wondering when?
Is the truth ever going to begin?
Copyright ©
aegurly
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2006-04-10 22:43:27]
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Re: The Sickness
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 07:48:16 AM AEST
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| Very good write. Keep writing...Mike |
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Re: The Sickness
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by Tiffyo4 on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 11:26:53 AM AEST
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this poem is very good for somone who is 13years keep up the good writing
Tiff |
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Re: The Sickness
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by TiaXander on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 07:36:36 PM AEST
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| I agree great job for someone so young! An thanks I enjoyed reading this... |
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Re: The Sickness
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by bigduck6769 on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 11:51:04 PM AEST
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this is awesome..
you have got some talent yourself..
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Re: The Sickness
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by elmizulkarnain on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 11:32:01 PM AEST
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I like this one .. It's simple yet beautiful. Message conveyed .. Great job ya!
Luv,
Elmi Zulkarnain |
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Re: The Sickness
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by redtears on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 08:26:41 PM AEST
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| sweet cracker! i really like your style. you are very good! thanks for reading my poem, i really apprieciate it as a 17 year old and trying to find someone i can share my feelings with, this website is really awesome. keep posting! |
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