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Love
Contributed by
ktbugg
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Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 01:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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One thing I’ve learned
Throughout the years
Is that even in happiness
There shall always be tears
With love, comes hurt
With desire, comes pain
But with neither of the two
There is left nothing to gain
For love is life
Love is for giving
And without love in life
Is life really worth living?
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Re: Love
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by syenn0512 on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 10:16:35 AM AEST
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You have made an important point in your poem,
which is "And without love in life,is life worth living?"
I'm sure everyone has to think hard before answering the question. |
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Re: Love
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 03:10:48 PM AEST
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| this is a clever poem...i like the way all the words fit together...very good, i like it a lot... |
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Re: Love
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 01:03:11 AM AEST
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Oh this was great and so very truthful. Keep on writing and keep on submitting. I loved this a lot. It was all beautiful
Bobo (Joel) |
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