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confused
Contributed by
jay89
on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 09:16:08 PM in AEST
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my knees start to shake,
when you're in sight.
my mind is filled with wounder,
my heart with fright.
when will this feeling stop?
when did it start?
how can i listen to my mind,
without breaking my heart?
i'm so confused.
what should i do?
i can't think of anything,
except you.
should i ignore you,
or just give it time?
i can't think straight,
my heart controls my mind.
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Re: confused
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 09:39:23 PM AEST
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heh...I really like it! its short and sweet...not in the mood for a long one anyways! but i really like how you keep the fight between the heart and mind continual because in life...it really is, don't we all know? I love how you ended it
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Re: confused
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 08:34:43 PM AEST
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Reminds me of a line in a poem I wrote about my courtship with my wife of twenty-five years, "Confused I kept searching for reason to leave but never a reason arose." Welcome to confusion. follow your heart, the mind will straighten things out later. And your knees will quit shakin'.
wabl
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