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To our Demise.
Contributed by
MollyCollony
on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 08:42:47 PM in AEST
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I propose a toast to our demise,
Let’s raise our glasses one last time,
To friendship *****,
And plain bad luck,
Using, and abusing,
When we swore we’d stop.
Let’s applaud the love,
And the lies,
Sick of seeing things through our own boring eyes,
But we'll always remember the cheap thrills,
And all the love that hatred kills.
Only now, we stop to think,
Between laughter, and the occasional drink,
That maybe, we’ve ruined ourselves.
Copyright ©
MollyCollony
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2006-04-10 20:42:47]
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Re: To our Demise.
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 09:14:53 PM AEST
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You can certainly write - and write good for that, but friend you must write from your heart; let your soul do the talking.
welcome to YPDC.
FRANCO
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Re: To our Demise.
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by jay89 on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 09:18:21 PM AEST
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that touched me.
i really liked this poem and it is nice.
you can write. |
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Re: To our Demise.
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 09:45:10 PM AEST
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I love it! It is so...completely...sarcastic?...whatever! the love that hatred kills, the shots and cheap thrills...cheers!!
~April |
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Re: To our Demise.
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by candysears on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 10:34:28 PM AEST
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| Excellent write..God Bless! |
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