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Confused
Contributed by
romance_pyro
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Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 03:00:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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My heart I thought made of steel
No matter the breakup I kept my will
But now I don't understand why
Its been three months and I still cry
This is something that is tearing me apart
The pain I feel is you still in my heart
Tonight I fear I was wrong and went to far
Blood stains my arm with three new scars
Now I sit and stare at the starlit night
I realize how weak I am with no chance of winning this fight
I wish I could die and end it all right now
But there is something that stops me and i dont know how
Something so powerful that saves my life
Can go unknown in all of my strife
Death may not be a option for me
But pain is my escape from reality
Maybe I will never find the truth I seek
I'm afraid my future is already bleak
My life is easy but these memories of you
Behold their power and what they do
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2006-04-10 15:00:23]
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Re: Confused
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by mama4lyf on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 11:31:49 PM AEST
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| I personally liked it alot. Good write. -M |
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Re: Confused
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by Tiffyo4 on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 02:46:28 PM AEST
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wow this write reminds me of this email i just sent somone i really liked this poem alot good job keep up the good work
Tiff |
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Re: Confused
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by Jen54 on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 06:01:54 PM AEST
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Really good write I am sure lots of people can relate to this. keep up the great job.
-Jen
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Re: Confused
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by crazy on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 03:55:09 PM AEST
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| pyro, what a strong message this is protraying. in your last poem you said that your poems were generated by emotions,so i think that it wolud be ..........i dont know what to say on this poem.so good write |
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