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DAYDREAM
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 12:33:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The girl in my dreams reminds me of you
the way she whispers in my ear the way you use to
my heart skips a beat everytime she comes near
the reasons you left i forgot i just wish you would regret
my soul pines for your lost love
you were the angel from above
but now my heart is surly broken
you stole my heart and kept it as a token
where for art thou my juliet
for her love i am sure to bet
the love i once had is gone
who i referred to as the coming sun
Copyright ©
Tiffyo4
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2006-04-10 12:33:56]
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Re: DAYDREAM
(User Rating: 1 )
by no_1nos_me on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 07:46:20 PM AEST
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Wow this is change from most of your other writings but it's very nice
good job |
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Re: DAYDREAM
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fairiepsycho on
Saturday, 6th October 2007 @ 06:37:55 AM AEST
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| Very good write, heartfelt and moving. |
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