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HOT
Contributed by
Shmokin
on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 12:31:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Hot
Throbbing, pulsating hot
Sweat drips down brow
Stroking, squeezing, slap
Only thinking of the now
Bending, streaching, crouch
Breaths laboured, sometimes quick
Soothing, screeching, sniffs
Spasmodic moves twitch
Rubbing, writhing, gasp
Pleasure/ pain divide
Groaning, moaning, sigh
Coming from inside.
XShmokinX
Copyright ©
Shmokin
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2006-04-10 12:31:41]
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Re: HOT
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 02:56:42 PM AEST
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| Good write! |
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Re: HOT
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by twick on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 10:34:08 PM AEST
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| fantastic imagery |
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Re: HOT
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by joydeep_nath on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 03:32:36 AM AEST
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| hm good one...nice rhythm..but tell me is it just me or it it the poem..y do i get dirty ideas in mind after i read it |
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Re: HOT
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by Fairiepsycho on
Saturday, 6th October 2007 @ 06:33:37 AM AEST
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| Your imagery is wonderful and worded very well. I love it when people write to where you can put yourself in that place. Keep up the great work! |
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