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Broken Armour and Dead Ends
Contributed by
guiltycircles
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Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 01:29:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
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dead end chases
life to death races
insensitive ******
pointless search for kicks
empty basins
chemical wastings
loveless child
gone feral, wild
ending quick
they claim you're sick
denying truth
ever-flowing youth
lies infiltrate
so much for the metal plate
armour filled with holes
killing all dead souls
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guiltycircles
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2006-04-10 01:29:50]
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Re: Broken Armour and Dead Ends
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 05:17:46 AM AEST
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i do agree with you it is Of course the misguided loveless ness that takes the kids away from us.
Good poem.
FRANCO
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Re: Broken Armour and Dead Ends
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by Kunoichi on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 07:32:37 PM AEST
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WOW. That's all I can say is wow. Really good write and I have to agree with Franco about the kid thing. My friend would totally love this except for the fact that they're not really good with poetry...well, except one. She'd really love it.
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