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Under a beating sun

Contributed by the_story_of_the_year on Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 12:38:15 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

What's the date?
What's your rate of breathing?
I'm lost and I don't know where I am

We're stranded so we better make the best of it
When night falls you'll never hear the end of it

We're deserted and I couldn't ask for anything better
I'd rather have nothing but you than everything without you

We'll make shelter and call it our home
It won't be warm, but we can call it our own

You and I
Under a beating sun
Barely getting by
Because we don't need anyone

Give you my plate so you'll never go hungry
Give you my soul so you'll never be lonely

We'll never miss a sunset
And we'll wait for the sunrise
The time in between we'll confess all our lies

I have so many to tell you
All concerning you

We may be lost
But I found you
What else is worth searching for?

Copyright © the_story_of_the_year ... [ 2006-04-10 00:38:15]
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Re: Under a beating sun (User Rating: 1 )
by dayslong on Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 12:50:46 AM AEST
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This is beautiful. There are a few lines in here that really struck me. Like "We'll never miss the sunrise." This was a pleasant read, thank you.

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