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If You Hear Me
Contributed by
theluckypancake
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Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 11:44:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Mother if you hear me, and you love me, youll cry with me.
Take me to a safe place, where darkness cannot find me.
Fighting my world is all I ever do.
Your mellow words will embrace my loneliness.
The sky has fallen hard on me in shame.
Merciful eyes look down, pleasing the softhearted.
I cannot be moved by words alone. My sweet-temper.
Taunting me and leaving me, making me adjust to you.
All the while, a furious blaze grows within.
Mother if you hear me, and you love me, youll cry with me.
(Cry with me)
Weaker by the night. Unemotional pain.
Curious elegance. Gentle shame.
Take me to a safe place, where darkness cannot find me.
Fighting my world is all I ever do.
Your mellow words will embrace my loneliness.
The sky has fallen hard on me in shame.
Mother if you hear me, and you love me, youll cry with me.
(Cry with me)
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Re: If You Hear Me
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by jada on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 11:48:06 PM AEST
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| i liked this poem it made me cry !welcome to ypdc!keep writing!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: If You Hear Me
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by onceandagain on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 07:54:20 AM AEST
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This is a very emotional write. Alot of pain is very aparent. You have expressed you lonliness and pain very well, and the crying out for the safety of your mothers love, and arms is heart wrenching. Very nicely done.
Gods Blessings. Mary |
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