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all i really ever wanted
Contributed by
jada
on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 11:38:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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All i really want is a peice of you heart
but you dislocate yourself from me to keep us far apart
you never even notice, you haven't gotten the clues
that my heart wants only one person and its calling for you
my heart says not to rush
but you seem to love my touch
you face in my dreams is what i'm scared of and hauted
but its u i'll always care for
its you i really ever wanted
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jada
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2006-04-09 23:38:58]
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Re: all i really ever wanted
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by Alison on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 01:09:48 AM AEST
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| very short and to the point. true and moving. awesome write. |
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Re: all i really ever wanted
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by Abhisek on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 02:11:29 AM AEST
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| good. donn't delay go get it. |
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Re: all i really ever wanted
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by aegurly on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 10:27:32 PM AEST
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| hey great write go for it !!!!! |
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