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words which rose from fury
Contributed by
lady_daisy
on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 08:55:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Emotional trash
words which rose from fury
a said, dedication
which fell through swiftly
never can I stay
always wandering the limbos.
The limbos of dreamland
or is it really reality?
So now I choose.
Yes this is my reality again.
The dreamland
to which I was born a gift to me.
Yet an eternal damnation
always waring and siding,
across some bold lands
I see drawn blood and chaos
a gift to the man
with a dark and deranged mind.
I’ll side, an eternal bliss,
wandering and helping,
across some scenic lands
I see a sun bleeding his raise
a gift to the man
with a warm smile and a pure mind.
Copyright ©
lady_daisy
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2006-04-09 20:55:37]
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Re: words which rose from fury
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 09:19:22 PM AEST
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I like this. I have no idea what it's about, but I like it.
I like the simplicity of this, the way the words run together.
The first stanza is my favoruite, I love the first two lines.
Good write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: words which rose from fury
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 09:03:41 PM AEST
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iRead a kind of emotional anger with in you and all that you see and hear around you, - a great love for your Land. also read a good poet that dwells within you; awesome array of word.
FRANCO
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Re: words which rose from fury
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by Tiffyo4 on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 04:29:35 PM AEST
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i like it very nicely written i mite say keep it up
Tiff |
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Re: words which rose from fury
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by Keilantra on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 05:59:32 PM AEST
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| very nice indeed. i'm liking your poems. |
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