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Life as a Coffee Cup
Contributed by
colaalone
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Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 01:25:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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A deadening, ceramic existance
Upon vacant countertops, with
Empty Stools that rotate at
Strange, awkward stances.
A girl walks in without
Receiving any glances, from workers
With tired hands and home
On their minds.
Mascara bleeds from her sunken eyes
Filled to the brim with regret.
She fills me with coffee,
But I could never even begin to fill her.
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colaalone
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2006-04-09 13:25:08]
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Re: Life as a Coffee Cup
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by slogan on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 01:43:42 PM AEST
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| I like this poem..read my poem "Courage conquers fear"...I think it will help you....jh |
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Re: Life as a Coffee Cup
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by In_a_while on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 01:47:38 PM AEST
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Great piece. filled with interesting observations and
imagery... as well as some sorrowful lonliness.
I like it a lot, keep it up
dw |
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Re: Life as a Coffee Cup
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by dayslong on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 02:59:03 PM AEST
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| I absolutely love the imagery here. This is beautiful, heartbreaking but beautiful. |
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