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Flirting Pigeons
Contributed by
chatabox
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Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 07:39:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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She landed, he landed, she turned her back
she certainly wasnt impressed
he cooed and wooed and bobbed up and down
he was obviously getting obsessed
She gave him a look as if to say
ok show me what it is that you do
you can have 2 minutes to impress me
or you go to the back of the queue.
His performance deserved an oscar
his wooing technique a delight
but with a look of contemp, she flicked her tail
then spread her wings and took flight
I wanted to give him a cuddle and say
that was a terrific display that you made
but as he flew off I heard him say
whats a pigeon got to do to get laid.
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Re: Flirting Pigeons
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chrissie on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 08:01:19 AM AEST (User
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I've watched this sight before Penny...and you have it to a tee...this is so funny! I love it..
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Re: Flirting Pigeons
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kassidi on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 08:08:03 AM AEST (User
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Wonderful poem! It put a smile on my face :D
Lovely!
Kassidi |
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Re: Flirting Pigeons
(User Rating: 1 ) by xFalling_of_Starsx on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 08:25:14 AM AEST (User
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This is really funny, had me laughing. |
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Re: Flirting Pigeons
(User Rating: 1 ) by Thumbsucker on
Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 09:28:51 AM AEST (User
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Observant and witty too........a dangerous combination. I wouldn`t want to get on your bad side. Luckily, your humor isn`t mean or nasty. I think you`d be great to be with at a campfire or on a long drive.
Great work Penny
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Re: Flirting Pigeons
(User Rating: 1 ) by Patricia_Petro on
Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 05:26:28 AM AEST (User
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Nice rhyme and very funny. I liked this one a lot.
~Patricia |
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Re: Flirting Pigeons
(User Rating: 1 ) by Love_impossible on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 12:51:29 PM AEST (User
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I too liked it, I wached a scene like that in one of my many drift-off's...It reminds me of school, believe it or not. |
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