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Sin.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 01:02:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I begin my life in sin.
I wished I could throw it all away in a bin.
I always seem like I am doing a backspin.
I got to hold my chin up high and grin.
Because no one is sinnest.
I walked to the din and looked at the bearskin and the deerskin on the wall.
I have always loved to wear a hairpin.
I don't see my kin and I wipe my mouth with a napkin.
I walked to the inn and I felt like doing a spin.
I don't have a twin and I don't ever win.
I want to change and not sin.
I am going to change and try not to sin and put it away in a bin.
Life is full of sins, but we all can change and try to not sin.
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Re: Sin.
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 04:14:55 AM AEST
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It was a absolute delight to read your poem “sin”
I have nothing more to say but your poem is a win, win, win…
FRANCO.
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Re: Sin.
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by girish on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 04:38:04 AM AEST
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| read my poem "Sins to the nature" we as human beings even do sins to nature. read my other poems on life. they tell you how to lead life. read particularlyy the poem "You are the way you look". it will tell u all about leading your life without committing sin. thanks lol. girish. |
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Re: Sin.
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by slogan on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 02:36:55 PM AEST
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| great write..I enjoyed reading this...jh |
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