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Tears
Contributed by
randumbchit
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Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 01:50:25 PM in AEST
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they burn like acid on the newly made wounds
they are to deep of gashes for your words to
like stiches mend
and so this river runs in a never ending flow
you can do nothing to help me so away is where you should go
now down in a storm of ice and fire
truth comes down like rain
(chorus)
you disowned me for a simple truth you wished not uttered
when you heard of it you choked you spluttered
not for lying treason or deceiving
but for a pitiful exuse for a reason
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randumbchit
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2006-04-08 13:50:25]
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Re: Tears
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by Tiffyo4 on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 02:03:14 PM AEST
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what do you mean what happened to me
Tiff |
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Re: Tears
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by Phantomdream on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 02:50:20 PM AEST
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| beautiful beautiful, It's splendid |
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Re: Tears
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by RLWildPassions on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 03:28:51 PM AEST
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Oh my, what is left to say, that your poem did not? Wonderfully gorgeous. Keep writing, you have talent for sure. This is a shining write. Very deep, can see all in my heart. You have my attention for sure. Please continue. RL
they burn
like acid on newly made wounds
deep gashes
words
stiches to mend
and so this river runs
a never ending flow...
help me so away
....is where you should go
now down in a storm of ice and fire
truth comes down like rain
(chorus)
for a simple truth uttered
you choked
you spluttered
not for lying treason or deceiving
but for a pitiful exuse for a reason
Lovely e.b.b.
RL
song or no.. wonderfully written here.. deep felt love at it best... oh my word.. yes... a clown flipping backwards on a hot street made of bubble gum tar... lol...
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