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Lost and Found - Track 6 - Reflections
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 11:20:35 AM in AEST
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He woke up one morning
And looked in the mirror
The image he faced
Became twisted with fear
An attempt to convince him
He'd made a mistake
To break his resolve
That Salvation ... was fake
( release date for track seven, Talk Sick, April 15, 2006 )
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 6 - Reflections
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 04:41:37 PM AEST
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Your poem struck me and I had to comment. I used to make fun of "jesus freaks" . I was lost and alone. I recently accepted jesus into my heart and as my savior, and had what I can only call A spiritual experience !!!!!!!! Dark forces will try to tempt you and tell you not to believe. I see things in a whole new light now, and hope you got passed that moment of lies from a darker force if you will. HUgs to you
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 6 - Reflections
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 07:14:48 PM AEST
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First of all my hat off to you for this spiritual work which is flowing with true human struggle.
The great thing about Cotrelle's songs is that you give us a story poem ahead of it, call it a liner note. This lets us understand Slide. Even better is that I have been reading Slide's stuff and it seems that I can hear the music play along. I actually feel as if I am listening more than simply reading. This is an example of your enormous talent. What I have picked up on here is that Slide's spiritual transformation has actually evolved him not only in soul but in his music. I see this as more a jazz song than a blues song. This shows that your character Mr. Cotrelle is changing and that makes me crave more.
Excellent Job as always.
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 6 - Reflections
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 11:10:18 PM AEST
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I think the flow in this was better than in the others bar the last one. It was faster and easier for me to read, too. I found it a lot more upbeat than the others.
That is a good thing, but it doesn't make the others bad. Not in the slightest.
Anyway, wonderful write, Scott. I am looking forward to the next one.
*hugs tons*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 6 - Reflections
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 11:22:27 PM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful.....
Well presented also... Great job allround..
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 6 - Reflections
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 10:03:38 AM AEST
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wonderfully written
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 6 - Reflections
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 06:01:00 PM AEST
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Aye, I think there's plenty to this one that resonates with all of us. And it's very polished, as well, as Phil pointed out.
Well done!
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