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Precious Gift
Contributed by
TheStoryTeller
on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 08:57:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When you hold something so precious
So precious in your hands
And its innocence and beauty
Falls away like grains of sand
When this precious gift is taken
And turned in to something new
It’s hard to comprehend
When it’s lost what once you knew
When you have done all that is possible
To keep it safe from harm
And the trust you have in others
Are the ones that cause alarm
The innocence is gone
It will never be the same
And the precious gift you held
Is not the one to blame
How can you ever trust anyone
To help and understand
The precious gift will never return
But you still hold it in your hand
© Lynn Cowman
Copyright ©
TheStoryTeller
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2006-04-08 08:57:58]
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Re: Precious Gift
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 11:41:15 AM AEST
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| this is amazing. i really like this poem as i can relate to it. i like the style of it... just spoke to my heart. |
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Re: Precious Gift
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by TiaXander on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 01:48:02 PM AEST
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| Hmm this poem had me thinking about my niece....really deep and kinda like the innocence was tainted. All in all a great read keep it up! |
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Re: Precious Gift
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 02:47:46 PM AEST
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Enjoyable read...Thank you for posting...
Jenni |
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Re: Precious Gift
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 10:51:04 AM AEST
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| wonderful poem from a wonderful poetess , yer a star. welcome Lynn |
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